Ⅰ 批改英语作文，，说明一下。
这次作文大有进步，语法错误大大减少了。
Ⅱ 英语作文需要被批改！
As far as I'm concerned, it's extremely important for us to have a healthy life. Everyone knows that a healthy lifestyle is essential despite a large number of students that don't pay heed to this. Take for example ring vacation, some people watch television for hours on end or face the computer day and night. Therefore, their eyesight gets worse and it affects the body as well. Staying indoors all day long also means they lack socializing with other people besides the people they live with.
最后那段有点看不懂，特别是‘国花’那部分，但前面那段已经修改好了。要是需要我继续帮忙可以把用中文写的第二段发上来，然后我再修改。有问题请追问。希望能帮到你。
Ⅲ 英语作文：对‘教师让学生们互相批改作文’这一行为有什么看法
I think teachers make students switch their essay and grade others is an action didn't respect private secret. As age, idea, and character, scores should also be personal things that should be respected and have personal power to decide whether he or she wants to let others know or not. But sometimes teachers didn't care or realize this behavior might make students uncomfortable. For example, if some students cannot write a good essay or have some strange idea to write, and other students know, they might laugh at those students who have strange idea. That would really hurt their feelings. They might not work hard next time or not like this class any more. This is why I said they should be respected and protected as private secret.
Ⅳ 怎么批改初中英语作文
我们学校是没有评语的，但是打分。首先关注单词拼写正确与否，然后是语法，写作文前版可以先让权学生看3至5分钟的范文，给一些小提示。初二英语作文，衔接也很重要。开头结尾要自然。还是建议批的稍松些。单词语法无误，中心明确就可以给高分。
Ⅳ 帮忙批改一篇英语作文
1.建议通篇用一般现在时 2.it extremely proves... 3.and makes 4.comfortable 5.it is nearly difficult to live without it 6.reading 7.know 8.and enjoy 9.instead of going10.when they finish their11.you can't imagine that you don't have TV in the home12.the other is...13.easily 14.it is more convenient to send an e-mail than the ... 15.to get news and interesting...16.you can use the commucation software such as QQ,MSN by which you can keep...17.so that you don't have to...18want to relax there are19.all of these 20if we don't haveTV...21.life will be in a ..
Ⅵ 初中英语作文（帮忙批改一下）
Winter holiday is approaching. What am I going to do?I want to go to Beijing which I have never been to.
As living in the south, I seldom saw snow before. So I want to go to Beijing especially for the snow. And I also want to feel the different winter.
Beijing is the capital city of China with lots of places of interests, Such a s forbidden city and the great wall. I am imagining how these place would look like in winter and they must be a great scene. So I want to go to Beijing in winter vacation.Hope to have completely holidays.
Ⅶ 如何批改学生的英语作文
每天改作业,最怕的就是该学生的英语作文.写错单词的,用错句型的,存在语法错误的,毛病皆是.有的同学的作文如要一一帮他改正错误,等于老师重新帮他写了一篇作文.这样势必造成批阅时间过长,影响其他环节的工作.如果粗略批阅则会阻滞学生英语写作能力的提高.针对这一问题,我摸索出一套自认为行得通的方法.
根据不同情况采用不同的批改方法.如果是在课堂上进行的写作（每个单元拓展部分都有写的能力的活动）.采取大家批.具体操作是抽两名同学在黑板上写,其他同学在练习本上写.写完之后,和同学们一起当老师,找黑板上两位同学写的文章的错误.让有类似错误的同学改正.指出文章的不足之处,有哪些地方需要改进.同时也要指出优点有哪些地方可供同学们学习.效仿.通过大家当老师一起改作文的方法既调动了学生的学习气氛又加深了犯错同学的印象,让他们不再犯同样的错误.
如果是课后作文,则采用收上来祥批和略批方式交叉进行.要确保每个同学在一期的英语写作中有几次祥批的机会.祥批时改出学生写作中词汇.句法.章法的错误.甚至包括单词拼写,大小写,标点符号和其他语法错误.指出学生存在的问题指明其努力方向.略批则只画圈圈点点,打分分等级.启发学生自己去找错误.培养其自发学习的能力.
如果是自习课上的课文,则采取互相批改的方法.先由老师讲解批改要点,指出批改方法和原则,注意要指出批改的具体注意点.如：大小写,单词拼写,标点,时态,语态,人称,句子结构,句子顺序等等.让学生心中有数,从而批改更详细.
当然,经过不同方法的写作批改后,有的同学可能写作水平任是涛声依旧.这时则需要找空闲时间面对面的批改了.就是当着学生面对面地批改.当面指出其存在的错误,让学生自己改正错误以加深印像.改完之后,让学生再体会一下.以便更好的整理思绪.
以上这些就是我在批改英语作文中找到的一些方法.希望同行多提意见,帮助我更好的搞好教学工作.
Ⅷ 批改英语作文
我就实话实说吧：这个作文我大概会打个67.5分吧：
We are surprise the scene
that a ck mother is begging eagerly monkeyteacher for purpose teaching the
child to climb the tree.
[教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[拼写错误] monkeyteacher
拼写错误，可替换选项为：monkey teacher, monkey-teacher, monkeyed
[低频警示] a ck mother 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] surprise the scene
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: ask, beg, demand,
require, request, implore, claim, pray, entreat 均有“要求，请求”之意。
ask:
最普通用词，指向对方提出要求或请求，长、晚辈，上下级之间都可使用。
beg:
指恳切地或再三地请求或要求，常含低三下四意味，也多用于应酬场合。
demand:
一般指理直气壮地提出强烈要求，或坚持不让对方拒绝的要求。
require:
强调根据事业、需要或纪律、法律等而提出的要求。
request:
正式用词，指非常正式，有礼貌的请求或恳求，多含担心因种种原因对方不能答应的意味。
implore:
书面用词，着重指迫切、焦急或痛苦地恳求或哀求，常含较强的感情色彩。
claim:
指有权或宣称有权得到而公开提出的要求。
pray:
语气庄重，指热情、诚恳和敬祈的要求，现不很常用。
entreat:
泛指一般“恳求或哀求”，含企图说服对方或用热烈的请求软化反对意见的意味。
1.2
It is not a fantasy ,
because there are many similar phenomenon from society which concluding a lotof
parents having a hope their childwould become achievement .
[教师点评]
[搭配错误] 搭配不当，become
achievement不规范，建议修改。
常见的系动词用法错误，点击查看。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[拼写错误] childwould 拼写错误，可替换选项为：child
would, child-would, childhood
[拼写错误] lotof 拼写错误，可替换选项为：lot of,
lot-of, loot
1.3
we all must confront with
the problem: how to dealwith the ecation hard and how should parents do when
they paly a role whichin a helper toward child or children's friends?
[教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[句子错误] 请注意句首单词首字母大写
[拼写错误] whichin 拼写错误，可替换选项为：which in,
which-in, witching
[拼写错误] dealwith 拼写错误，可替换选项为：deal
with, deal-with, Duluth
[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有“孩子”之意。
baby:
日常用词，一般指从刚出生的婴儿到满两岁的或非常小的孩子，常含钟爱意味。
child:
普通用词，含义广，无感情色彩。泛指从胎儿、婴儿到10岁左右的儿童。
infant:
书面用词，狭义指出生后到两岁的小孩，广义指7岁以下的孩子；法律上则指未到法定年龄。
youngster:
泛指任何年龄的儿童或者少年，多指男孩，多为年长者的使用。
2.1
We all know only
thecondition along with the correct way would go to the goal , oneself want to
dowithout a ask of one else .
[教师点评]
[语法检查] 请检查 a ask (Wrong article)
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[句子错误] 句中不同单句之间需要添加连词。
并不是任何标点符号，在任何情况下都可以用来连接两个并列句子。常用的能把两个句子连接起来，构词并列复合句的标点符号有分号和冒号。在没有连词的情况下，一般不能用逗号并列两个句子。点击查看。
[拼写错误] dowithout 拼写错误，可替换选项为：do
without, do-without, without
2.2
when indivial and
interest are absent from a student , it might be a fail, which not only wastes
many resource but also ruins one's confidence.
[教师点评]
[句子错误] 请注意句首单词首字母大写
[搭配错误] 语法错误，be fail不规范，建议修改。
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[低频警示] absent from a student
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 ruin...confidence
在教材中出现过 14 次
SeeAlso: destroy confidence108,break confidence34
2.3
" I don'twant to study "
just exist in the child's mind and teachers and parentsdon't know the truth ,
which is critical in making the whole plan .
[教师点评]
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 know...truth 在教材中出现过
1040 次
SeeAlso: acknowledge truth44,recognize truth34
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...plan 在教材中出现过
3156 次
SeeAlso: do
plan166,make design102,cause plan9
[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有“孩子”之意。
baby:
日常用词，一般指从刚出生的婴儿到满两岁的或非常小的孩子，常含钟爱意味。
child:
普通用词，含义广，无感情色彩。泛指从胎儿、婴儿到10岁左右的儿童。
infant:
书面用词，狭义指出生后到两岁的小孩，广义指7岁以下的孩子；法律上则指未到法定年龄。
youngster:
泛指任何年龄的儿童或者少年，多指男孩，多为年长者的使用。
[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/
recognize/ realize/ foreknow
3.1
The more giving , fail the
interest and indivial , the moreworse to happened.
[教师点评]
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[拼写错误] moreworse 拼写错误，可替换选项为：more
worse, more-worse, morose
[学习提示] 易混词汇: give, accord, award,
confer，grant, endow, present, bestow 均含有“给予，赠给”之意。
give:
最普通用词，泛指将自己的东西给予他人，所给予的东西，物质或非物质的均可。
accord:
侧重所给予的是应得的或是恰当的，或是因某种原因而适于接受的。
award:
通常暗示所给予的东西是接受者应得的，而且给予者往往是具有裁判权力的。
confer: 通常指授予称号或学位等。
grant:
多指出于慷慨、怜悯或正义感而给予，并且通常是在被请求下给予。
endow:
指捐赠大量的钱作基金，也可指给予非物质的东西。
present:
指正式地给予或授予，通常伴有仪式进行。
bestow:
正式用词，指把某物作为礼物赠送于某人，也可作引申用。
3.2
living in a incorrect
situation concluding a wrong teacher anda short-sighted parent, is a crazy
ecation which drives child go to the edge.
[教师点评]
[语法检查] 请检查 a incorrect (Wrong
article)
[低频警示] incorrect...situation 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] crazy...ecation 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[名词错误] 冠词缺失，drive child不规范，建议修改。
[动词错误] 语法错误，建议将drive sb do改为drive
sb to do。
3.3
It must be impossible to
reap profitwhen child go to the first wrong step.
[教师点评]
[词序错误] 请检查the first wrong
step，确认词序是否正确。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[低频警示] reap...child 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[拼写错误] profitwhen 拼写错误，可替换选项为：profit
when, profit-when, profiting
[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有“孩子”之意。
baby:
日常用词，一般指从刚出生的婴儿到满两岁的或非常小的孩子，常含钟爱意味。
child:
普通用词，含义广，无感情色彩。泛指从胎儿、婴儿到10岁左右的儿童。
infant:
书面用词，狭义指出生后到两岁的小孩，广义指7岁以下的孩子；法律上则指未到法定年龄。
youngster:
泛指任何年龄的儿童或者少年，多指男孩，多为年长者的使用。
3.4
try to make sure that child
having a chance in personality as a free childcan fly without
consideration.
[教师点评]
[句子错误] 请注意句首单词首字母大写
[拼写错误] childcan 拼写错误，可替换选项为：child
can, child-can, childcare
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...child 在教材中出现过
210 次
SeeAlso: make
baby148,make
kid114,do
child110,cause child34,make
fry17,make youngster8
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...chance 在教材中出现过
42559 次
SeeAlso: take chance7247,accept chance36
[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有“孩子”之意。
baby:
日常用词，一般指从刚出生的婴儿到满两岁的或非常小的孩子，常含钟爱意味。
child:
普通用词，含义广，无感情色彩。泛指从胎儿、婴儿到10岁左右的儿童。
infant:
书面用词，狭义指出生后到两岁的小孩，广义指7岁以下的孩子；法律上则指未到法定年龄。
youngster:
泛指任何年龄的儿童或者少年，多指男孩，多为年长者的使用。
3.5
I am firmly convinced that
under the change ofopinion , the parent would wiping the blind ecation
completely thoughchallenge should not underestimated , the achievement will
appear in the nearfuture.
[教师点评]
[动词错误] 建议把 would wiping 改成 would
wipe (Auxiliary Verb Agreement)
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[低频警示] blind...ecation 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] wipe...ecation 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
怎么样？
Ⅸ 怎么批改初中英语作文
初二学生英语还在表面期，还需要逐步渗透，这时候为了培养学生学习英专语的兴趣，应该属以鼓励为主，也就是说，在你批改作文的时候要尽量画出该生好的语句，当然错误的语句一定要改出来，最好抽出一部分同学单独面批，然后下次再面批其他同学的英语作文。评语主要是以夸赞为主啦，面批的时候告诉他，这句如果这么写xxx就更好啦，告诉他，咱最近学了啥啥啥，把这个加进去，很容易的，看，这样的句子就更有亮点啦。反正，英语教学不易操之过急，慢慢渗透，逐步细化，兴趣的培养是很重要的~~
Ⅹ 求大神批改英语作文
题目有拼写错误
In recent years, more and more people migrate to another country.
批改意见： and more可以改为 an increasing number of
For instance,some stars,business men and the millionaire migrate to another country.
批改意见：stars, business men和millionaire 的并列性不太强，需要替换。migrate to another country与前文重复，可以替换为choose to immigrate into foreign countries.
What’s the reasons for this phenomenon.
批改意见：没有问号……what's 应该为what are，注意主(reasons)谓(are)一致的问题。 句子可以考虑修改为What has led to the tend of migration?
First of all ,domestic environment become worse,such as haze weather and sandstorm weather.
批改意见：觉得这个高级词汇使用上有点泛滥。国内的环境，雾霾天气，沙尘暴天气……这里的表达都非常的Chinglish。还不如改成，There is more extreme weather than before over the nation, such as sandstorms and severe smog. severe smog这个是我查BBCnews的表述，感觉比较native
And some big city’s traffic is heavy,population continues rise at the speed of 2 million people every year.
批改意见：还是表达很中国式英语的问题。建议改成The traffic in many cities is in poor condition because of numerous private cars. And the domestic population has started to climb sharply, increasing to 2 million annually.
Secondly,another country’s environment is better. Moveover,their policy of people is more humanized.
批改意见：怎么都是中文直译的感觉。要习惯native说话的语序。而且我觉得环境好这个理由有点牵强，毕竟世界上哪里都有环境好的地方和污染中的地方，考虑替换另外一个理由。moreover拼写错误。后面这一句Chinglish again，令我不禁怀疑这不会是翻译软件辅助的吧……而且什么their policy？从英语角度考虑，这个they根本无从指向。而且这个理由写得太sharp了，要是中国老师would probably want you to get real bad hurt.- -句子整句大修！考虑修改为Moreover, some foreign countries have better legal system so that indivial rights could be fully respected. 句子意思意会一下就可以了。
So people want to migrate to there.
批改意见：migrate to there低级错误。整个表达非常不可接受。For these reasons, quite a few people prefer to migrating to another country rather than staying in their home country。
Last but not the least,many people migrate to another country in order to follow the trend,They think migrate toanother country is also the symbol of reputation and wealth,so do they.
批改意见：Chinglish，不想重复了。Last but not least, many people choose abroad, following the trend of migration, most of whom think that migration is trappings of fame as well as wealth.
In general,I contend the idea that we should stay in China. because China is a friendly country, she is our mother.
批改意见：我只是不喜欢这个句式而已……感觉就是用得太死板了。尽管是标准六级作文句式。我个人认为，语句流畅是很重要的。平时多点阅读，培养语感。为什么不喜欢这一句，是因为这个句式和前文的搭配感觉不和谐。……对，不……和……谐……读起来特别别扭。标点什么的就不吐槽了。because前后因果关系不强，比较牵强。In general,I contend the idea that we should stay in China because China is our motherland, the most wonderful and historical country ever.
Although she has many disadvantages,we can help her to solve theproblems.And I believe that she will be better in the future...
批改意见：这句话要是批改老师看到了可能会骂一句熊孩子……好吧虽然我不是老师但我已经骂了。除了机器直译这个蛋疼的东西，就是这两句话所表达的意思……orz……不吐槽。Yet much else is discouraging，with lots of problems unsolved, our country is definitely worth our devotion to make it a better place.
总评：整篇文章的结构不是很清晰，需要分段，并且使用更多恰当的衔接过度的词语。第三部分“我的看法”可以写多一点，因为这篇文章是很清晰的三段式。分析原因的地方内容写得不是很好，很空洞，没有什么实际的原因列出。内容也是很重要的！至于句子一些细节在上边已经提到了，希望要好好注意！应该要重点表现的第三部分竟然这么短实在是很令人失望。要合理安排篇章的分布。
希望你写作文可以有更大的进步！
看了很久打了很久，很认真的写完了。
希望可以采纳了哦亲~~~